Valley of Pleasure
Valley of pleasure
Where we're kids once again
A touch of love awaits
Loving caring touch
Oblivious to the mountains that surround
Valley lies in playful unknowing
The mountains that made us
Mountains that made the valley
Out there on the horizon
There are just peaks
Down here it's
Peaceful immortal love
The valley beckons you
Mother valley beckons you
posted by Sidharth @ 11:05 PM
3 Comments:
Sorry to hurt your feelings, if you wrote that too seriously. But this thing, doesn't convey anything other than the usual read-forget bit. A poem should be a cute permutation of words defining a higher meaning, rt? I'm looking forward to some serious literature from you, eventhough you havn't promised me some, so not your fault. But in this world, evenwhen everything betrays you, film, literature and all those fancy pieces of art, it's quite natural a human tendancy to cling again to such stuff with never ending hope, rt?.
Sure, I've hope in you. Hence, I expect more. You can't reject me, pal.
vatmeek boy, relax, ease into it, you wont miss the kick if you ever were supposed to.
vatmeek!!!! - what do you mean by 'read-forget'? - there is no such thing as such. you never forget anythin. You just choose never to recall, and the decision to recall depends on your will - so dont generalize. As for serious literature, well i really cant understand what will you derive from a cliche like that. Will that enhance your life in any way? Just enjoy what you see buddy, and ignore what you dont like. Don't patronize!!!!!!
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